You have completed some sound research into similar products, and good research into the target audience. There is some evidence of relevant draft work, and good organisation.
To improve include more detailed analysis of the contents page and double page spreads, and try to include images of the pages. As you begin to produce your magazine include more evidence of drafting.
You also need to upload the draft contents page for your preliminary task.
Your blog would benefit from clearer organisation and labelling.
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ReplyDeleteYou have completed some sound research into similar products, and good research into the target audience. There is some evidence of relevant draft work, and good organisation.
To improve include more detailed analysis of the contents page and double page spreads, and try to include images of the pages. As you begin to produce your magazine include more evidence of drafting.
You also need to upload the draft contents page for your preliminary task.
Your blog would benefit from clearer organisation and labelling.